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content/blog/2015-06-03-service-discovery-introduction.md

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-title: Service Discovery Introduction
-created_at: 2015-06-02
+title: Advanced Service Discovery Features in Prometheus 0.14.0
+created_at: 2015-06-01
 kind: article
-author: Fabian Reinartz
+author: Fabian Reinartz, Julius Volz
 ---
 
 This week we released Prometheus v0.14.0 — a version with many long-awaited additions
 and improvements.
 
-On the user side, new mechanisms for service discovery aim to make it easier to
-dynamically update the targets Prometheus scrapes. In addition to DNS-SRV records,
-[Consul](https://www.consul.io) is now supported out-of-the-box and a file-based interface
-allows you to connect your own discovery mechanism.
-Over time, we plan to add other common service discovery mechanisms to Prometheus.
+On the user side, Prometheus now supports new service discovery mechanisms. In
+addition to DNS-SRV records, it now supports [Consul](https://www.consul.io)
+out of the box, and a file-based interface allows you to connect your own
+discovery mechanisms. Over time, we plan to add other common service discovery
+mechanisms to Prometheus.
 
-Aside from many smaller fixes and improvements, you can now also reload your configuration at 
+Aside from many smaller fixes and improvements, you can now also reload your configuration during
 runtime by sending a `SIGHUP` to the Prometheus process. For a full list of changes, check the
-[changelog for this release](tba).
+[changelog for this release](https://github.com/prometheus/prometheus/blob/master/CHANGELOG.md#0140--2015-06-01).
 
 In this blog post, we will take a closer look at the built-in service discovery mechanisms and provide
-small practical examples. As an additional resource,
-[Prometheus's configuration documentation](/docs/operating/configuration)
-can be helpful.
+some practical examples. As an additional resource, see
+[Prometheus's configuration documentation](/docs/operating/configuration).
 
 
 ## Prometheus and targets
 
-For a proper understanding of this blog post, we have to take a look at how Prometheus sees targets.
-To Prometheus each scrape target is nothing more but another set of labels – even its address, which
-is defined by the `__address__` label.
+For a proper understanding of this blog post, we first need to take a look at how
+Prometheus labels targets.
 
-In configurations we have a hierarchy of labels. There are global labels, which are assigned to
-every target scraped by the Prometheus instance. One level above is the `job` label, that is defined directly
-in the configuration file. On the next level are labels defined in the target group from which
-a label is derived. Finally, there are labels that are set per-target as we will see soon.
+There are various places in the configuration file where target labels may be
+set. They are applied in the following order, with later stages overwriting any
+labels set by an earlier stage:
 
-Each layer of labels overwrites any colliding labels from the layers below. Eventually, we have a flat
-set of labels that describe a single target. Those labels are then attached to every metric that
+1. Global labels, which are assigned to every target scraped by the Prometheus instance.
+2. The `job` label, which is configured as a default value for each scrape configuration.
+3. Labels that are set per target group within a scrape configuration.
+4. Advanced label manipulation via [_relabeling_](/docs/operating/configuration/#relabeling-relabel_config).
+
+Each stage overwrites any colliding labels from the earlier stages. Eventually, we have a flat
+set of labels that describe a single target. Those labels are then attached to every time series that
 is scraped from this target.
 
+Note: Internally, even the address of a target is stored in a special
+`__address__` label. This can be useful during advanced label manipulation
+(relabeling), as we will see later. Labels starting with `__` do not appear in
+the final time series.
+
 
 ## Scrape configurations and relabeling
 
-Aside from switching from the ASCII protocol buffer format to YAML, a fundamental change to 
-Prometheus's configuration is the switch from per-job configurations to more generalized scrape
-configurations. For simple setups the two can be thought of as almost equivalent.
-At the same time, scrape configurations allow greater flexibility for more advanced use cases.
+Aside from moving from an ASCII protocol buffer format to YAML, a fundamental change to
+Prometheus's configuration is the change from per-job configurations to more generalized scrape
+configurations. While the two are almost equivalent for simple setups, scrape configurations
+allow for greater flexibility in more advanced use cases.
 
-Each scrape configuration is assigned a job name which serves as a default value for the
-`job` label. The `job` label can then be redefined for whole target groups or single targets.
+Each scrape configuration defines a job name which serves as a default value for the
+`job` label. The `job` label can then be redefined for entire target groups or individual targets.
 For example, we can define two target groups, each of which defines targets for one job.
 To scrape them with the same parameters, we can configure them as follows:
 
@@ -69,16 +76,18 @@ scrape_configs:
       job: 'job2'
 ```
 
-Through a mechanism named _relabeling_ any label can be removed, created, or modified on a per-target level. 
-This allows fine-grained labeling that can also take into account meta-data coming from the service discovery.
-Relabeling is the last stage of label assignment and overwrites any labels previously set.
+Through a mechanism named [_relabeling_](http://prometheus.io/docs/operating/configuration/#relabeling-relabel_config),
+any label can be removed, created, or modified on a per-target level. This
+enables fine-grained labeling that can also take into account metadata coming
+from the service discovery. Relabeling is the last stage of label assignment
+and overwrites any labels previously set.
 
 Relabeling works as follows:
 
-- A list of source labels is defined
-- For each target the values of those labels are concatenated with a separator
-- A regular expression is matched against the resulting string
-- A new value based on those matches is assigned to another label
+- A list of source labels is defined.
+- For each target, the values of those labels are concatenated with a separator.
+- A regular expression is matched against the resulting string.
+- A new value based on those matches is assigned to another label.
 
 Mutiple relabeling rules can be defined for each scrape configuration. A simple one
 that squashes two labels into one, looks as follows:
@@ -101,15 +110,19 @@ This rule transforms a target with the label set:
   "label_b": "bar"
 }
 ```
-... into a target with label set:
+...into a target with the label set:
 
 ```
 {
   "job": "job1",
+  "label_a": "foo",
+  "label_b": "bar",
   "label_c": "foo-bar"
 }
 ```
 
+You could then also remove the source labels in an additional relabeling step.
+
 You can read more about relabeling and how you can use it to filter targets in the
 [configuration documentation](/docs/operating/configuration#relabeling-relabel_config).
 
@@ -118,7 +131,7 @@ Over the next sections, we will see how you can leverage relabeling when using s
 
 ## Discovery with DNS-SRV records
 
-Prometheus has supported target discovery via DNS-SRV records for some time.
+Since the beginning, Prometheus has supported target discovery via DNS-SRV records.
 The respective configuration looked like this:
 
 ```
@@ -129,13 +142,14 @@ job {
 }
 ```
 
-With the latest changes not only can you describe multiple SRV records to be queried but can
-also use meta labels that are attached by the service discovery during the relabeling phase.
+Prometheus 0.14.0 allows you to specify multiple SRV records to be queried in a
+single scrape configuration, and also provides service-discovery-specific meta
+information that is helpful during the relabeling phase.
 
-When querying the the DNS-SRV records, a label named `__meta_dns_srv_name` is attached to each
-target. Its value is set to the record name for which it was returned. Having structured
-SRV record names, e.g. `telemetry.<zone>.<job>.srv.example.org`, we can extract various
-labels from it:
+When querying the the DNS-SRV records, a label named `__meta_dns_srv_name` is
+attached to each target. Its value is set to the SRV record name for which it was
+returned. If we have structured SRV record names like `telemetry.<zone>.<job>.srv.example.org`,
+we can extract relevant labels from it those names:
 
 ```
 scrape_configs:
@@ -170,7 +184,8 @@ access parameters for our Consul agent and a list of Consul services for which w
 to query targets.
 
 The tags of each Consul node are concatenated by a configurable separator and exposed
-through the `__meta_consul_tags` label. Various other meta labels are extracted.
+through the `__meta_consul_tags` label. Various other Consul-specific meta
+labels are also provided.
 
 Scraping all instances for a list of given services can be achieved with a simple
 `consul_sd_config` and relabeling rules:
@@ -181,7 +196,6 @@ scrape_configs:
 
   consul_sd_configs:
   - server:   '127.0.0.1:5361'
-
     services: ['auth', 'api', 'load-balancer', 'postgres']
 
   relabel_configs:
@@ -199,9 +213,9 @@ scrape_configs:
     replacement:   '$1'
 ```
 
-This synchronizes the given services from the local Consul agent.
+This discovers the given services from the local Consul agent.
 As a result, we get metrics for four jobs (`auth`, `api`, `load-balancer`, and `postgres`). If a node
-has the `production` or `canary` tag a respective `group` label is assigned to the target. 
+has the `production` or `canary` Consul tag, a respective `group` label is assigned to the target.
 Each target's `instance` label is set to the node name provided by Consul.
 
 A full documentation of all configuration parameters for service discovery via Consul
@@ -210,17 +224,17 @@ can be found on the [Prometheus website](/docs/operating/configuration##relabeli
 
 ## Custom service discovery
 
-Finally, we added a file-based interface to talk to your custom service discovery or other common mechanisms 
-that are not yet supported out-of-the-box.
+Finally, we added a file-based interface to integrate your custom service discovery or other common mechanisms
+that are not yet supported out of the box.
 
-With this mechanism, Prometheus watches a set of directories or files which contain target group information.
+With this mechanism, Prometheus watches a set of directories or files which define target groups.
 Whenever any of those files changes, a list of target groups is read from the files and scrape targets
 are extracted.
 It's now our job to write a small bridge program that runs as Prometheus's side-kick.
-It retrieves changes from a service discovery mechanism and writes the target information
+It retrieves changes from an arbitrary service discovery mechanism and writes the target information
 to the watched files as lists of target groups.
 
-The files can either be in YAML:
+These files can either be in YAML:
 
 ```
 - targets: ['10.11.150.1:7870', '10.11.150.4:7870']
@@ -232,7 +246,7 @@ The files can either be in YAML:
     job: 'postgres'
 ```
 
-... or JSON format:
+...or in JSON format:
 
 ```
 [
@@ -263,12 +277,14 @@ scrape_configs:
 ```
 
 What's missing now is a program that writes files to this directory. For the sake of this example,
-let's assume we have all our instances for different jobs in one large unnormalized MySQL table.
+let's assume we have all our instances for different jobs in a single denormalized MySQL table.
 (Hint: you probably don't want to do service discovery this way.)
 
-Every 30 seconds, we read all instances from the table and write the result
-into a JSON file. Note that we do not have to keep state whether or not anything has changed. Prometheus
-will automatically detect changes and applies them to targets without interrupting their scrape cycles.
+Every 30 seconds, we read all instances from the MySQL table and write the
+resulting target groups into a JSON file. Note that we do not have to keep
+state whether or not any targets or their labels have changed. Prometheus will
+automatically detect changes and applies them to targets without interrupting
+their scrape cycles.
 
 ```
 import os, time, json
@@ -306,19 +322,19 @@ if __name__ == '__main__':
 ```
 
 While Prometheus will not apply any malformed changes to files, it is considered best practice to
-change your files via renaming, as we do in our example.
+update your files atomically via renaming, as we do in our example.
 It is also recommended to split larger amounts of target groups into several files based on
 logical grouping.
 
 
 ## Conclusion
 
-With DNS-SRV records and Consul, two major ways of doing service discovery are now natively supported
-by Prometheus. From the examples we've seen that relabeling is a powerful approach to make use
-of meta data provided by service discovery mechanisms.
+With DNS-SRV records and Consul, two major service discovery methods are now
+natively supported by Prometheus. We've seen that relabeling is a powerful
+approach to make use of metadata provided by service discovery mechanisms.
 
 Make sure to take a look at the new [configuration documentation](/docs/operating/configuration/)
-to upgrade your Prometheus setup to the new release and find out about other configuration options
+to upgrade your Prometheus setup to the new release and find out about other configuration options,
 such as basic HTTP authentication and target filtering via relabeling.
 
 We provide a [migration tool](https://github.com/prometheus/migrate/releases) that upgrades